Two books one review
I’m going to start this review by saying how good the story in these two books is, before I go onto what I unfortunately is a bit of negativity.
The story.
At its foundation this story is about a good guy, with the perfect life, a wife, a teenage daughter, and a highly successful career, who is approached by the FBI to help them build a case against his employer.
Unsurprisingly this goes wrong and his world is torn apart.
The rest of the story is about his efforts to get justice.
Nash Falls
Walter Nash is a tall, wimpy highly intelligent man. At the start of the story he attends his dad’s funeral, a Vietnam Veteran who had little time for the son who sought to play Tennis instead of NFL style football.
His distain for his son is so deep he even has another vet’ bad mouth him at the funeral.
The case is built from the very beginning of the book that Nash is a physically weak, but highly intelligent man, who does anything to avoid physical excess or any form of danger.
The company he works for is run by Burton Temple and his son Rhett. Both men are typical modern day lotharios who treat people with contempt. Although they embrace Nash because he brings in more money than anybody else.
So when the FBI approach Nash to help them uncover the illicit side of the Bartons business he is slow to say yes but eventually does.
The Bartons are only mid-level operators. The big fish that the FBI are after is Victoria Steel, and her ultimate boss
Steel is half English half Chinese and is a ruthless drug runner using the Temples to launder money.
Nash’s world falls apart as his cover work is exposed, no spoilers from here on except he has to change his identity and becomes Dillon Hope
Hope Rises
Part two of the story with Nash established as Dillon Hope and working undercover to gain revenge by exposing Victoria Steer and the Rhett Barton.
His new looks, and persona couldn’t be further from his old identity.
The story crosses Asia and America.
Hope/Nash’s ethos and his beliefs are tested to the limit.
The mild man that is, or was Nash, wants the ultimate justice, whilst the new Dillon Hope is beginning to have empathy for some of the criminals.
When the time comes which ego, Nash or Hope, will rise to the surface.
This is a really compelling story but there’s one thing in this book that really had me struggling to set aside.
Nash’s transformation into Hope takes over a year, and there are some physical changes, but for me it’s a bit like Clark Kent taking off his glasses and nobody noticing that he is Superman.
For me its just too much of a stretch to think that nobody notices its him.
The other thing that troubled me is this should not have been two books.
There is no getting away from the fact that Nash Falls just stops. There is no conclusion. No Cliffhanger. It just stops. The last chapter in that book is just the end of another chapter, like any other in the book.
The first chapter in Hope Rises is the next chapter of the previous book.
If you were to read either as a standalone it wouldn’t work.
There is no finish to one and no start to the other.
The end of the story is really good but I couldn’t help thinking that there were two or three chapters in the second book that weren’t needed.
As much as I enjoyed the books, and I am a massive fan of the author, I really couldn’t shake the feeling that he had a good story in mind, and when he wrote it he realised it was too long for one book. So he looked for a continent place to end the first and realised the second wasn’t long enough so threw in a few more chapters.
I did enjoy the books but I felt almost conned at the end of the first one. The lack of an ending made it a bit weak.
Although I said the first book didn’t end on a cliff hanger, and it didn’t, I still wanted to know what happened next, purely to get a conclusion to the story.
All that being said would i recommend the books. Yes and No.
Yes if you are a Baldacci fan.
Yes if you start book one knowing you are going to have to go straight to book two.
But as stand alone’s, or if its your first by David Baldcacci NO.
Nash Falls Pages: 611. Hope Rises Pages: 433
Publisher: MacMillan
Both Books available now.
